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Masami by Soyala-Silveryst

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I love the autonomy. the way the shoulder is angled looks great with the shoulder blade fur. the coloring above the nose is a little choppy ,but it shows how you draw. the right ear seems to be too high and the left to far angled. I like the way you did the "cheeks" and how it easily flowed into the neck. the muzzle is well positioned but a bit small for an average wolf. (I don't know if it's meant to be smaller) and the eye color pops out with the Orange. I like her coats pattern bit her eyes seem to look at two different things.your shading is very well done. very good job on this artwork c:
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Soyala-Silveryst Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:love:thanks for the critique, she will help me to progress increasingly with the wolves, I am very happy that you took a little of your time to help me. :hug:
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Saturn-Wolf Dec 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
oh I was so pleased to see such beautiful work and I thought I would express how lovely it was c:
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Soyala-Silveryst Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I'll try to improve the things that you mentioned because I intend start a comic about this wolf and her daughter.:D
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Saturn-Wolf Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
awe I intend to read that when it come out now. c:
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Soyala-Silveryst Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awn, thank you, I've done the rough draft of the first chapter, I will give an improved him to start editing on the PC.:love:
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Saturn-Wolf Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
cool! I can't wait to see it.
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